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Friday 29 July 2016

That was the holidays

                                  That was the holidays


Remember that time when you stayed up till 10pm, your eyes were so red?
Remember when you were twisting and turning to get a good night sleep?
That was a late night.


Remember staying home and baking with your mum, the cupcakes you made were delicious?
Remember cleaning the slippery egg shells of the bench?
That was baking.


Remember when your Aunty Debbie came from Australia and you were dying to see her?
Remember you gave her a huge hug and she smelt like candy?
That was Aunty Debbie.

2 comments:

  1. Great writing Kate. I love the fantastic adjectives you have used to describe things. I can definitely remember times like these. Perhaps next time you could use your senses to add more descriptions such as how the cupcakes smelled.
    From Mrs Drake

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  2. Awesome writing Kate, Aunty Debbie will love the way you have described her :-)

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